Sestina+Triolet+Pantorum/Antagonists
- Marshall Azir
- Feb 17
- 3 min read

Theme: Antagonists
These poems are character sketches of my antagonist across my stories.
Character: Asherah
Type: Sestina
Title: Mother of Carnage
Ancient semitic bride rested in vengeance
Her frame in deist slumber incased in gold
Her meaning and life the host of divine tree
Some forgot her, some remember her, but to all she is great mother
Her face a touch of beauty and a touch of exposed skull
In her countenance you will find war and fertility
Fate brings daughter of forge to the mother of fertility
Emergence of Tameria is the focus of motherly vengeance
Years of forced sleep unleash tyrant seen as great mother
Asherah’s face having seen glory beyond sight leaves beauty and skull
Exposed for all to see underneath flesh is skeleton of gold
She never sought to flee but on others land she plants her tree
Oh ancient conquer, awaken continuing to grow her tree
No longer carved into a pole of hope for fertility
But a vow to turn human heads into carvings on a skull
The darkness in her eye is void in gold
A haunting spectral spouse sunken in vengeance
Desiring to end life, not begin, no longer a mother
Crown of haunting hands leaves a son without a mother
Broken tears, broken fears but no broken branches on her tree
Because epicurean frame in lust maker her gold
A conductor to her deep plated vengeance
Once a womb of life now ire of fertility
Beauty once found in worship finds rage in skull
Her unit of conquest etched on skull
Fought with many no longer seen as mother
But an eon of vengeance
Strips the human race of moral fertility
She seeks to turn concrete monuments to tree
Realizing humans servitude is the true gold
Yet the danger of being layered in gold
Is the malleable material is lathered on skull
Giving a Becoming god of innovation fertility
Sprouting leaves and branches of the technology tree
Making the tyrant realize the child has out grown the mother
Leaving the legend in an ash of vengeance
Vengeance kill fertility
Gold molded to the skull
Uproots the Tree Mother
Character: Thoth
Type: Pantoum
Title: God of Grief
Math, medicine magic are no match for malice
Moon crown cant protect from fear
God of hidden knowledge towards humans, callus
Rival orange eyes seek to clear
Moon crown cant protect from fear
Conquering reptilian black
Rival orange eyes seek to clear
Leaving a rageful feedback
Conquering reptilian black
Reminding gods mortality is a conscious plague
Leaving a rageful feedback
Being repaid for justice that has always been vague
Reminding gods mortality is a conscious plague
God of hidden knowledge towards humans callus
Being repaid for justice that has always been vague
Math, medicine magic are no match for malice
Character: Daxeus Canaseen
Type: Villanelle
Title: Hunter of Enlightenment
River of obsession found in mandate
He fights to find the oath breaker
Seeking punish the one escaping imperial cognate
To him divine and duty equate
Turning the sandman into the grim reaper
River of obsession found in mandate
Imperial crown his only agnate
Leaving understanding a broken timekeeper
Seeking to punish anyone escaping imperial cognate
Daxeus Canassen, military magistrate
Only knows rules and laws no patience for a seeker
River of obsession found in mandate
Obsessed hunt for holy man leaves him desolate
Yet, instead of let it go he becomes a reaper
Seeking to punish everyone breaking imperial cognate
The journey for Asurmaan-Ra to emanate
Leaves man and rival a weeper
River of obsession found in mandate
Seeking to punish everyone escaping imperial cognate
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